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I am not quite so old

To feel this old.

And I am not quite so young

To think this young.

But every so often

If I squint just the right way

I can see that

I can still make paperclips.

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That poem is a heart punch wow!

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Yes! Ka pow!

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A beautiful post and especially relevant for me this week. I just turned 35 and am trying to decide whether that means I've arrived at something, or if it matters.

I never really "went dancing" when I was younger. I got drunk and danced when other people were dancing, which wasn't often. My cigarettes were cloves, but I had the same black eyeliner insecurities you did. And sometimes I think, now that I'm a little less full of shit, it'd be fun to just go out and dance sometimes.

But who would go with me?

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Happiest of birthdays! Living rooms are also great as dance floors.

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If it is one of those days where I remember how much I love and need music, I will often dance in my kitchen when I'm making dinner. It can be so exhilarating. But even though I am all alone, it is a particular kind of work to not allow myself to feel silly, to let that all just go and really move exactly how my body wants to move. If I can get past the inertia of the absurd, I feel so much energy and excitement and passion and just ALIVENESS. But weirdly, on the other side of that, I also feel little edge of grief because I am made aware in those moments of all I could be if only I were to let myself. But I am still not entirely sure how to let myself most of the time. Let myself move, let myself express, let myself take up space, let myself be joyful, let myself be heard, let myself be unafraid. I think I am edging more in that direction in fits and starts - but it is frustrating that this seems to happen right at the moment when society says it's time to take a back seat. Middle age is a fascinating time of life.

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That is an excellent point!

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All of us right here 👏🏼♥️

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There is a quote -- from where I don’t know -- that I frequently remember when I recall my own, long past, dancing days.

I was a keen dancer of ballet, Scottish Highland dancing, Scottish Country dancing, Scottish ceilidh dancing, tap dancing and, in my teens, Latin American dancing, at which my teacher offered to make me Junior European Champion; he had the skill, knowledge and experience to do it, too, having coached world champions. But by then I had my sights on university (and a rather precious idea that dancing should not be competitive) so I gave it up, flat, and went cold turkey in every kind of dance other than social dancing, which I still love.

So the quote means a lot to me, and it’s this: There are shortcuts to happiness. And dancing is one of them.

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I had the opportunity to dance recently... quite unexpected and I am past my middle years now but dancing remains in my body as relevant still as my blood cells. Walking back to my hotel at night, a street party in full swing and Freed from Desire started out of the speakers. I leapt into action and danced/sang all the way home. Glorious. Not sure what others were doing but my heart beat faster and on that last night of my trip, I’d found a sublime end.♥️

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You've made me want to dance. Thank you for letting us see the marvelous vision of you dancing down the street at night.

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I’ve played it several times since I got back home. It energises me and fills up my body with its own sound. I wrote and linked it in my Substack contribution this week. If we danced more, we’d fight less I think.♥️

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It sounds as if you found a sublime beginning. Loved your post. We get older but we don’t have to get old

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Couldn’t have said it better and thank you. ♥️

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Just sitting here in the wee Manhattan hours, listening to my quiet neighborhood sounds when you gonged my phone. Brilliant post and Frank O’Hara the NYC poet to boot. It’s ok to get older, Sophia; don’t get old

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The Island is a good book - listening to Aldous speak is a thing of beauty. If you’ve never heard, check it out. Such a beautiful voice... subjective that is, of course. Mind you, i don’t think he was a Wizard Headmaster, do you....? ;)

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Is that you, Dumbledore? Aldous is a very bright guy. A bit of a muggle sometimes, but he's smart of his kind.

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Yes yes, I deserve the mockery, but that is what happens to foggy brains who write about middle age after 11pm. Have mercy for it will likely take me another forty-some years to forget this typo.

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Sophia, It wasn't until I was teaching my Writing About Music class today at St. John's University that one of my students mentioned that Harry Potter connection. I thought it was hilarious actually, and was reminded how we're all walking on a tightrope, with everything we post, because we have no safety net, no editors to save us from our own slippery fingers and late night (or daylight) brain spasms. (Winking heart emoji here.)

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❤️

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I was issued a recommendation for your page via a general Substack email. I clicked. I immediately am looking at a naked Burt Reynolds. I don't know how to feel about this.

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let's go with a warm feeling inside

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Hey, i think it’s a great piece. And i think Albus Huxley could be a great character.... !

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Lovely to read a post that is encouraging about young people. We talk, glibly, about them being our future, then blame them for being young, and tell ourselves we were never as bad as they. But we were (if we’re were worth a dime, anyway) and, besides, they’re not. Whenever I’ve had anything to do with Goths, or Punks, or any of the other youth tribes they congregate in to create a new family for themselves as they are having to move slightly out of their original one (and finding it a bit scary, however much they put in a brave face), the mind of tribes adults often denigrate and even fear, I have found them unfailingly polite and cheerful, no matter how dark or scruffy, to our eyes, their clothes. I don’t have so much contact with young people now (as you can probably guess from my reference to Goths and Punks!) other than my two very charming young neighbours. But I’ve always found that if you can try to keep your own young heart a,I’ve, then youth really does call to youth -- whatever age the body it’s in.

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Thank you for this lovely piece. Started my day with a smile. The writing - and Burt Reynolds.

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This was a delight to read while waking up with my keto-bomb coffee and two dogs cuddled with me next to my therapy lamp. :>) We do what we can, don't we, even dance sometimes. Thank you so much for the poem, too, and for Bert. Grrrrr.

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Beautiful writing. Nice scene. I wonder if those young ones knew who Burt is. 😃

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Good post!

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Joy Face!!

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I’m not much of a dancer but I’ve recently discovered the best place to dance in LA (filled with queer cowboys and cowgirls) 🕺 let’s go on your next Cali visit!

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